I am taking a college course called the psychology of religion. It's VERY interesting, but unfortunately I have been asked to do this:
Research Paper: 100 points You will write a research paper that deals with some aspect of religion. This can be almost anything except a proselytizing document that encourages the reader to see the light and convert to the writers point of view. I would like it to be a paper that leads the writer to a greater understanding of their own, or one of the other major world religions. It can be done as a very serious study of a particular religion or aspect of a religion or history of the development of a religion, or it can be done is a somewhat lighter vein. The catch is that you are to prepare for the second class meeting a proposal for what it is that you would like to write about (even allowing for the small chance that some of you might not like to write at all.
I must admit that I am really, really rusty on the whole research paper thing. I don't think I've written one in about three years. The topic I chose to write on is Childfree Christians. I was wondering if the people who are a lot smarter than me could critique my thesis statement. I can think of no other place to get a quick answer from intelligent people I respect a lot.
I suppose I should add the obligatory "no flaming" disclaimer since it has a religious theme. So, be nice. No bickering! I'm not here to put anyone's beliefs down. I'm taking this class to gain a greater understanding of world religions. Without further adieu, here is my craptastic thesis statement.
In the past 100 years, social, economic and environmental changes have caused Christian women to call into question previously held ideals regarding motherhood and reproduction, leading many to the belief that a woman seeking to serve God has several other, equally valid options available to her.
My friends won't say anything bad about it and while that's great, it doesn't help me much. I need suggestions for improvement!
Thank you
Research Paper: 100 points You will write a research paper that deals with some aspect of religion. This can be almost anything except a proselytizing document that encourages the reader to see the light and convert to the writers point of view. I would like it to be a paper that leads the writer to a greater understanding of their own, or one of the other major world religions. It can be done as a very serious study of a particular religion or aspect of a religion or history of the development of a religion, or it can be done is a somewhat lighter vein. The catch is that you are to prepare for the second class meeting a proposal for what it is that you would like to write about (even allowing for the small chance that some of you might not like to write at all.
I must admit that I am really, really rusty on the whole research paper thing. I don't think I've written one in about three years. The topic I chose to write on is Childfree Christians. I was wondering if the people who are a lot smarter than me could critique my thesis statement. I can think of no other place to get a quick answer from intelligent people I respect a lot.
I suppose I should add the obligatory "no flaming" disclaimer since it has a religious theme. So, be nice. No bickering! I'm not here to put anyone's beliefs down. I'm taking this class to gain a greater understanding of world religions. Without further adieu, here is my craptastic thesis statement.
In the past 100 years, social, economic and environmental changes have caused Christian women to call into question previously held ideals regarding motherhood and reproduction, leading many to the belief that a woman seeking to serve God has several other, equally valid options available to her.
My friends won't say anything bad about it and while that's great, it doesn't help me much. I need suggestions for improvement!
Thank you
