Creepy stories?

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C'mon guys.
Lets all sit around the metaphorical campfire, eat some hikari, and swap stories.

Can be something that happened to you, or not. :)
 
buahaha.
creepypasta tiem.

The Intruder is a silhouette and similar in shape to a Siamese cat. When sitting, it is about 7.5 feet tall. It has two overly large, slanted eyes, which glow a bright fluorescent green, and have no
pupils. It blinks these eyes occasionally. Other than the eyes, it has no other discernible facial or body features.
Whenever you enter your home after dark, The Intruder is always watching. It sits about 10 feet away from you in plain view. It remains immobile and does not even try to conceal its presence. While outside,
it can only be seen by one person at a time. If it were to be within the sight range of two people then the first person who sees The Intruder would remain being able to see it while it would remain completely invisible to others.
It emits no noises of its own. The only time it can be heard is when it is stretching its claws on a tree or your house siding. If you approach it then it will run away very quickly and violently, kicking up dirt and rocks. The sounds of the wind from The Intruder’s movements and flying debris from under The Intruder’s feet can be heard. If you were to throw an object toward it or discharge a firearm at it you would get the same effect. Once you turn back to the door to insert your key you will find that The Intruder has noiselessly returned to its previous position where it continues to watch you.
Some say that The Intruder listens to your key hit the lock. They say that The Intruder can eventually ascertain the shape of your key simply by hearing the pins of your lock moving. It is unknown how many times The Intruder must hear you unlock your door before it can determine the exact shape of your key.
You see, The Intruder wants to kill you, that is, if this creature is even capable of wanting anything. Perhaps it is better to say that it intends to kill you. However, The Intruder can only kill you inside your house, and may not force its way in. Furthermore, it cannot enter an empty house. You must already be at home in order for it to enter. If you were to run outside of your house once The Intruder enters, The Intruder will pursue you, drag you back inside, and then kill you.
If you ever hear a key hitting your door in the dead of night then it may be The Intruder trying out its key that it has made. The Intruder only tries to use its keys when it is close to perfecting them, so if you do hear it trying to unlock your door then you can be certain that it will have a proper working key within a few nights. If you enter your house through another means, for example a garage or screen door, then you may suddenly find it them inoperable from the outside, through both remote or attempted physical operation of the door. If you attempt to leave your door unlocked in order to prevent The Intruder from hearing the shape of your key, then you may be disappointed to find that the door has been locked by the time you arrive at home.
If you hear a key hit your lock it is advised that you turn off all of your lights and attempt to push on the door to try and prevent The Intruder from entering, although it likely outweighs you. Once The Intruder enters your house all light sources above that of a candle become blinding to all inhabitants other than The Intruder. If you have time to light a candle then it is suggested, as this will allow you to see the silhouette without becoming blinded. A very small advantage that you may have is that, once inside a home, all inhabitants are able to see The Intruder simultaneously.
The Intruder will kill every human inside of the house. It will only attack pets if the animal chooses to engage The Intruder. Most animals choose not to engage. The only time that the Intruder will make any
noise of its own is during a killing strike. The Intruder will make a quick hissing sound during this strike, and will not make this noise again until it claims its next victim. The Intruder has never been known to kill anyone without hissing at the killing blow. It will usually try to completely disable its prey to the point where it cannot move before such an action is taken. It is thought that The Intruder prefers to disable its prey before a kill strike because the act of hissing may be the only time that it is vulnerable to damage. This is
purely speculation however.
 
Oh man i have so many... I am from Asheville, NC, what a great place for ghost... Helens bridge is one of the most popular. I've been up there numurous times and its spooky! Below is a cool story about Helens Bridge and a picture. Enjoy.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=f7lrK8PNSGw

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And a few more from Asheville. :) Sorry, i couldnt find anymore pictures...

The Biltmore Estate (Asheville, NC)
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Back in 1914, George W. Vanderbilt died from complications from a surgery he had for appendicitis. His wife was extremely upset. So late at night, in the Library, she would sit in front of the large marble fireplace, and talk with George though he was never really there. Her servants started to think she was losing her mind. To this day, late at night you can still hear her voice talking with George very softly. Also, you can feel George's presence in the Billiard Room, and the 2nd floor Oak Sitting room, one of his favorite rooms in the mansion. During rainy late nights, George would sit and read. Workers report feelings of being watched, apparitions, voices, laughing, & screams. A headless orange cat has been seen by numerous visitors roaming the area between the Gardens and the Bass pond. The Pool Room is also a focal point of unexplainable events. The sound of people swimming echoes throughout the entire lower floor in the dead of night. Insane laughter can be heard coming from the drain at the bottom of the pool. It is said to be haunted by a lady in black. Employees report hearing footsteps on the second floor. It's $10 for the small tour and $50 for the full tour of the house. But be sure you stay CLOSE to the guide. Odds are, there will only be 3 or 4 people touring with you.

Chicken Alley (Asheville, NC)
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The legendary ghost of Dr. Jamie Smith, lived at this infamous Asheville locale known as "Chicken Alley" over a century ago. For decades, countless sightings of his ghost have been reported. Dr. Smith was killed in a bar-room confrontation in 1902 at the old historic "Broadway's Tavern." The tavern was destroyed by fire the following year. The close vicinity known as Chicken Alley has been victim to his ghost for over one hundred years!

Erwin High school (Asheville, NC)

In the nineteen-seventies when the new Clyde Erwin High school was built just outside Asheville, the remnants of what was called the Old County Home Graveyard was dug up to make room for the new building. Numerous transients & casualties of sickness who were buried here were moved across the street and planted below unmarked wooden crosses. It's said that the restless spirits of those buried here still haunt the school, and many janitors who have worked the night shift there refuse to recount the things they've experienced while inside. Unmarked graves are said to still lie beneath the potter's field, overlooking the school.

The Grove Park Inn (Asheville, NC)
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There is a lady dressed in pink that haunts this Inn. You can see her and hear her late at night. Several guests and employees have had several encounters with her. She is known to tickle toes at night while visitors are attempting to sleep. When you get close to room 545, it seems to get cold. You can usually hear doors slamming, laughter, and talking from rooms that are not used.

Helen's Bridge (Asheville, NC)

When the Zalandia Castle caught fire, a woman named Helen lost her only child, a daughter. Helen was so crushed by the loss she hung herself from the bridge right down the road from the castle. On Halloween night go to the bridge and try to conjure Helen. If she is successfully called, you car will mess up in some way so that you can't get down the mountain.

Channel 13 WLOS (Asheville, NC)
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People say the building is haunted by a servant from a time when the building was home to Dr. Samuel Westray Battle. The ghost's name is Alice and reports describe her walking around the building and playing with the TV equipment. Some say Alice is also the Pink Lady, because The Battle Mansion is next to the Grove Park Inn, and she has been seen walking over to the Inn.

Old Battery Park Hotel (Asheville, NC)
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It's said that in a private apartment building in downtown Asheville, which used to be known as the Battery Park Hotel in the early to mid 1900's, apparitions can be seen very early in the morning. Individuals who worked the morning shift in the pantry refused to go in alone because a man who was murdered there was known to reveal himself in spirit form to employees.

Old Abandoned Forestry Compound (Asheville, NC)

There is a building in the compound which has all the windows boarded up. The downstairs consists of a long dark hallway with doors alternating on either side. In one downstairs bathroom there is a toilet filled with blood. Upstairs there is a room used by a now dead prostitute. This building is nicknamed the "Whorehouse" for that reason. Even when the temperature outside is 70 degrees, it barely reaches 40 degrees inside. Strange noises are heard by people who live in the Shiloh neighborhood, and lights have been seen as well. There are other buildings in the compound, and their doors are open and closed at random. There is a length of rope hanging from the rafters in one building.
 
hmm interesting...I had one thing happen to me once when I was 8 years old, It was at dead of night when I went camping in Lake (don't remember) and like around 1:15 A.M. I heard noises and everyone else heard it but we all didn't know what was making the sound and when we went out of our 3 tents as it was me and my moms boyfriends son and my sister was in a tent with my moms boyfriends daughter and we walked around to find where the noise was coming from and it led to this old shed which was locked so after we got closer we heard the noise fade away and when we heard it gone away we went back into our tents but one thing that was weird was our tents were moved closer to the shed than before and we can see with out flashlights that something was moving it while we were looking for the weird sounds. After 10 full minutes we went to the table with food and had another late snack before we go to sleep again in the tent, but once we got back into the tent and closed the opening completely we were all rushed with a strong wind and we can see things outside flashing over and over on us and then we were tossed over to the top part of the tent and we tried getting out of the tent but something was holding onto the opening zipper and didn't let go then after 2 minutes of being jammed inside of the tent we heard the wild pack of wolfs howling at the night and then we were put back into place while the tent was being shifted to the right spot where we put the tents on before the attack. A Camp advisors came by to check up on us since we were being tumbled around and making noises, he and she came by and ask if we were ok. We said yes we were but they knew we were shaken with fear of what was outside. They had to check the 100 yard perimeter of our side of the campsite. Then we heard screams and yelling a minute later and then we figured it was the camp advisors that were screaming and yelling! We then went and ran into the truck and locked the doors and we had covered ourselves with our blankets and had our hoods on...Then while we could see everything through the window on the truck a fog bank arised to our campsite and we had 0% visibility. So with that we can no longer see whats outside. Then after we stayed in the truck the whole night once my moms boyfriend woke up earlier than us she screamed unrageously loud and therefore we all had been woken up. We asked what she was screaming about and when we looked on our front window shield it was all covered with blood! We were all frightened with what we already witnessed but when we unlocked the doors we couldn't unlock them all and we heard noises again and then we figured to not look anymore and hid away from the windows and stayed toward the middle of the truck. Then I was so afraid I had nothing on me but my paintball gun and then I told everyone im going to go check outside and what my mom took out was a fishing knife and my moms boyfriend took out a baseball bat and my sister and moms boyfriends son and daughter stayed inside to hide, we told them to lock the doors and hide. So once we got outside I went to the back of the truck and took the paintball box and I upgraded the fps (Feets Per Seconds) which was currently on 225 fps to 500 fps which hurts as F*** if you get hit by that kind of speed with a plastic paintball. I changed the marker (gun) barrel longer and bigger for more accuracy when firing. I started getting alot of my paintball clothing which were carbonate steel platings and had my full front to back helmet and other paddings over my body. Then while I was changing my mom and moms boyfriend went on to look around while I was the one protecting the rest in the truck with my paintball gun. I was on the left side of the trucks door and when I was getting the attachments on I locked on and went off. Once I was about 60 Yards away from the Truck I heard my lil sister screaming so I then ran as fast as I could and I then saw a hairy thing trying to get in. (My first thouht was a punk *** guy who was trying to scare us.) Then I was like "HEY Get the F*** away from the Truck you ***hole!" Then it just ignored me which got me so pissed! I then put the marker to full automatic...Then when I was about 25-30 feet from the thing I started shooting the ugly bastard! I was yelling and cussing at it and then it broke the window and scared the others in the truck then I took out a hand knife that I had forgotten that I left on the side of my right leg of the pants and I then threw it at it and got its back it then turned around and started running to me and I was like "HOLY SH**!..You hairy *** mother F***er! Get away from me!" and I was running so wildy and while I was running away from it I was chased so far and never looked back that when I did look back it wasn't chasing me...it was out of sight. Which gave me the thought that it headed back while I was running away from it. While I was running back I saw a track of blood leading to the truck and then when I got to the truck I didn't find anyone in the truck or anywhere nearby...so I was yelling out for my mom and my moms boyfriend and they were so far that they couldn't hear me and or see me. I then started yelling out to the rest of them and I couldn't hear then responding. Then while I was in a state of panic! I found another track of blood which led to the higher part of the park which was on a mountain and the bloody track led over to a oven valley. I then spotted the ugly thing about 115 feet from me. I then followed it quietly and while I got closer I saw my lil sister and my moms boyfriends son and daughter all unconscious. I was so mad after being scared to my knees content I ran to the thing and I then took a big rock and threw at its head which was too close to the others head. My throw had to be perfect or else it would mean risking the others life with this hard toss. I then took the throw and got a head shot. And when I got his attention I took my marker and started giving it a full auto head shot with 500 fps. The full round which was a total of 800 pieces of paintballs, took way into its hairy head. It was knocked out leaving the others on the ground while they were their I took a whole water bottle and splashed everyone with water to wake them up. Then once they were recovered I reloaded the marker I started walking everyone over to the truck. While I was watching their back 360 degrees around everyone which were so close to eachothers they were touching eachothers bodies and were shaking so badly they were so terrified they wanted to run to the campsite. We then started running and when we started running we could see the campsite and the truck and then when we got their we saw my mom and my moms boyfriend running back and having no sign of the thing where they went to look. And they started wondering why everyone was shaking and full of blood and saw the whole campsite and truck broken with blood everywhere. They took out all the fishing knives and when we were thinking of the other things we packed into the trip we remembered we brought a Crossbow for fishing we loaded it on us and we then were on the look out for any signs of return of the hairy thing that attacked us. After 20 minutes of waiting we saw it 300 feet away from us on the top of a ledge on the mountain. I started aiming at the beast with my paintball gun and my mom started aiming the crossbow at it aswell and my moms boyfriend started getting ready to throw the fishing knives at it. It then saw us all together and started charging at us. Then my mom started firing the arrows I attached a second paintball container which can hold 1000 paintballs each so with these two together attached I got 2000 rounds all together. I then started firing on full auto when my moms boyfriend started throwing the knives at it which were missing while a few took hit at the target. I then fired on full auto non stop until it went away or killed. I was looking for a kill so we could be at peace. After using almost all my paintball It gave way and was killed with my moms arrows. We then reported the attack an few minutes later. We waited and waited until police came by and they did and they wanted to be sure it was fully dead so they took out a shotgun and blasted the hairy things head gone. They were trying to call the Camp Advisors office but no one returned the call and they asked us if they knew what happened to them. We told them thats thing possibly caught the two of the advisors and killed them. We then were told to go home where it was safe. It took over 2 hours of driving home with half fear still among us and half was feeling at ease. The police then secured the whole campsite from 3 miles radius from the attacked spot. When we got home we took a rest and just ate lunch and then went off to a local baitshop to go fishing 2 days from now. While we were done getting baits and some new lures we went home again. When we were back ut the night we were home before the day we go fishing we were all in the living room watching Animal Planet. After we watched the shows on the channel we went off to sleep in our rooms, later at night around 1:15 A.M. We heard the noises again...we then saw the windows rushed with a horrid wind and we had the doors shaking and the fishes in the tank in the side of our bed going crazy and was filled with my cichlid community which were a 10" Male Dovii, 15" Male Umbee, 13" Female Red Devil, 15" Male Red Terror, 26" Jardini Arowana, 12" Female Managuense, and alot of crenicichlas. They were all flaring at the front of the glass which was facing the shaking closet and when we were all watching the room go crazy the fishes went berserk and started being territorial as something is in the front of them being too close to their home. And when everything went more weird the fog outside came in. We then figured it can't be true that It came back alive for more. The windows was all closed and then we saw the fog seaming through the glass windowns which was 4 panes of glass for sound reduction. Then the fog all came into the room and house and we had another 0% visibility. Then we were all knocked out by something that swung at us all in the face. Then....



Too Be Continued. >=)


A Quick spotting story is when we stayed in the hotel in Las Vegas in the hotel Paris and one night when we came back from swimming downstairs in the indoor pool we heard thumping on our floors...Then we saw foot prints leading from the kitchen to the bathroom, We were curious so we went to check up on it. We saw blood writings on the glass mirrow saying "Get Out of here, You are not welcome to be administered for our kings fortune."," If you stay any longer I shall have no choice but to kill you all at one night, which would be your last night here" We then took note and packed everything and left and ran to the lobby and went looking for a place to stay at.


Continued later on some other time lol tired...=/


Oh but their was this one time that is true that while I was at home with my family here in California, one night on the the filipino channel we had a breaking news of an elder who owned a big house in Manila and around the house was lots of trees and was fenced. While the news reporters came by hearing about the neighbors seeing a lady in white floating around the outside of the house. Im not sure if you guys believe in ghost or not but if you don't believe in it go to the Philippines...I assure you, you may witness something you can't explain. Those of you Pinoy and Pinay MFKer's might know something about the horrid things happening now a days in the Philippines. And so while the reportes came by to check the house no one was inside of the house and when they all gather in the front of the house the reporters and neighboring people around the house came by to see what was wrong and while they were terrified to hear the news of the elder that was so nice to the neighbors children had gone to the heavens above our almight god. They all saw a lady in full white dressing floating around the house and they all thought it was all BS and thought someone was just hanging onto something wearing powder and a dress...but when they all looked closer they all noticed they could see through the lady and then when they started making alot of noise the lady had started floating slowly towards the people and while they noticed her floating on by they started running away from the gates of the house and everything else and headed far from their own homes. This was a breaking news that happened way back like around 1997-1999 And I was still very very young then while I watched this on the news...


this took too long to type everything :nilly:
 
creepy huh? i got one.

we where setting of explosives in a field, i ran out put a charge in it, started running back. i know it was out about 100 yrds. when i got to the berm i look back expecting the blast any second. nothing happens, we all look at each other like "****... now somebody has to go put another blasting cap in it"... just as my buddy grabs a bag full of gear it goes off about 40 yrds in front of us! pulled out NVGs and didnt see anyone but there where foot prints leading away from where we had originally set it....

fanned out and searched the area and didnt find anything. tracks just disapeared about 20 yrds from where they started. and the wierd thing was, there where no tracks leading up to it, just away...
 
Here's one that happened to me.

One night as I was laying on my side in bed, trying to fall asleep, I felt something touch my knee and run up my my thigh, over my hip, over my side and up my shoulder. Thinking my mom had let one of my guy friends or my ex into the house, I rolled over and saw no one.

About two weeks later, I was trying to fall asleep again when I felt I should roll over and open my eyes. It was just some weird urge. I did, and I saw the black silhouette of a man standing in my closet. It looked like it had mass and was solid, only problem is that the man's legs should have been inside my dresser and his head would have been through a shelf. My sister apparently saw the same thing once.

Recently, I got brave and made a ouija board and my mom and I asked if there was anyone who was here all the time. We got an answer from something (ghost, or maybe just us?) that claimed it was a WWII pilot that had fought "tojos." Kind of offensive since we have Japanese family and ancestry, but we didn't say anything about it. Anyway, we asked if it had a message for us and it said no, we tried to tell it goodbye, but it spelled out "I abide." I asked if I had seen it in the closet and it said "Yes.":nilly: Then we told it goodbye.
 
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