Poetry

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Onion01

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So, anyone here into poetry? I always thought it was a joke, but my 12th grade english teacher, a WWII veteran, introduced us to war poems and other deep, meaningful poetry, and changed my mind. I don't write it, but I do enjoy reading it occasionally. Anyone else?

Here's one he showed us that I liked. He was very much into war poems by the WWI war poets. BTW, I know these are grim, but they are very moving I think. I like lighter poetry as well ;)

Suicide in the Trenches

I knew a simple soldier boy
Who grinned at life in empty joy,
Slept soundly through the lonesome dark,
And whistled early with the lark.
In winter trenches, cowed and glum,
With crumps and lice and lack of rum,
He put a bullet through his brain.
No one spoke of him again.


You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye
Who cheer when soldier lads march by,
Sneak home and pray you'll never know
The hell where youth and laughter go

[FONT=sans-serif,Helvetia,Arial]Richard Cory[/FONT] [FONT=Courier,sans-serif] Whenever Richard Cory went down town,
We people on the pavement looked at him:
He was a gentleman from sole to crown,
Clean favored, and imperially slim.

And he was always quietly arrayed,
And he was always human when he talked;
But still he fluttered pulses when he said,
"Good-morning," and he glittered when he walked.

And he was rich - yes, richer than a king -
And admirably schooled in every grace;
In fine we thought that he was everything
To make us wish that we were in his place.

So on we worked, and waited for the light,
And went without the meat, and cursed the bread;
And Richard Cory, one calm summer night,
Went home and put a bullet through his head.

-- Edwin Arlington Robinson [/FONT]
 
DULCE ET DECORUM EST1
Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped behind.
Gas! Gas! Quick, boys! – An ecstasy of fumbling,
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling,
And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime . . .
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie; Dulce et Decorum est
Pro patria mori.
 
Poetry is for girls and sissys!



HaHa J/K. Though I dont really enjoy it. I dont have an ounce of creativity in me and I find it hard to appreciate it. However, those poems from the vets are really nice. Kind of a gripping, powerful, and personal insight to the hell of war. WWI was so ugly, I couldnt imagine being 17 or 18 and put in those situations. :(
 
JD7.62;2289079; said:
Poetry is for girls and sissys!



HaHa J/K. Though I dont really enjoy it. I dont have an ounce of creativity in me and I find it hard to appreciate it. However, those poems from the vets are really nice. Kind of a gripping, powerful, and personal insight to the hell of war. WWI was so ugly, I couldnt imagine being 17 or 18 and put in those situations. :(

exactly the type i like. doesn't need to be violent, but those drawn from real personal experiences I think are really moving
 
cool. suicide in the trenches and dulce are some of the poems we studied in school. I love poetry/language, but after O levels have really lost it.
 
Cough Cough


One bright day, in the middle of the night,
Two dead boys, rose up too fight.
Back to back they faced each other,
They drew their swords, and shot each other.
A deaf policeman heard the noise,
He hurried over and killed, the two dead boys.
If you do not believe this lie is true,
Ask the blind man....He saw it too.
 
rmorse;2289308; said:
Cough Cough


One bright day, in the middle of the night,
Two dead boys, rose up too fight.
Back to back they faced each other,
They drew their swords, and shot each other.
A deaf policeman heard the noise,
He hurried over and killed, the two dead boys.
If you do not believe this lie is true,
Ask the blind man....He saw it too.

weird, but a cool read. Author?
 
Onion01;2289310; said:
weird, but a cool read. Author?

No clue. Just a poem my dad taught me when I was young.
 
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I keep fish, im called a fool.....
It my little world which i control.....
I feed them well, and watch them grow.....
When they eat too much, they make a mess
But its alright, They relieve my stress....
When they mate, I want to cry....
Cuz i know! they're bout to multiply....
Upon a star..... i make a wish......
That i'll have moar..... Monster Fish......:ROFL:
 
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