resume please help

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As a person who hires professionals and who also has a degree in human resource mgmt, here's a couple of tips.

Do not include references. I could potentially write you off before interviewing you if your references don't impress me. Having to request references will get you in for an interview where you can impress the employer before he sees your references. References are meant to support what the employer will hopefully think of you before he calls your references.

Do not use personal references. They mean squat to an employer. I want to know if you are a good worker and have competencies. Your neighbor and father-in-law will tell me wonderful things about you but won't be able to comment on your work ethic.

If you are going to use a cover letter, make absolutely sure it is typo-free and professionally formatted. If a prospective employee writes a cover letter with mistakes, it's a sign of their poor attention to detail. I will throw out resumes without even glancing at them if I see a glaring error in the cover letter. This is critical if applying for a job where typing is one of the functions of that job. An employer will want to know why he should hire you. A good cover letter can have that info for you and may help you not falter in an interview when you are asked that question.

If this were my resume, I would change the header Employment skills to Workplace Competencies. Use the same tense in your verbs. I would remove the word developed. If you have the skill/competency, say so. :) Try to start each competency with an action word. Diplomatically, Ability and effectively are not action words. Can and will are great starter words.

Examples:

Can resolve customer complaints in a dilpomatic/client-centered fashion. (the term client-centered could win you some points with a company that relishes great customer service)

Will use effective telephone communcation skills with a high level of professionalism

I would place Education section after employment skills. Education is important if the employer is looking for someone with a certain educational background, but I'd be just as interested in your trandsferable skills/competencies that you will bring from your employment history.

As much as some think a picture helps, it might with the right manager, but will absolutely cause some managers to trash your resume. While some may hire based on looks, do you really want an employer to determine your worth based on your appearance in a single photo? It may also insult the employer that you're trying to get hired on your looks.

If you're applying for a professional position, be professional in your approach to the employer.

I hope that helps. I hope you find the job you're looking for. :)
 
Chaitika;2656921; said:
As a person who hires professionals and who also has a degree in human resource mgmt, here's a couple of tips.

Do not include references. I could potentially write you off before interviewing you if your references don't impress me. Having to request references will get you in for an interview where you can impress the employer before he sees your references. References are meant to support what the employer will hopefully think of you before he calls your references.

Do not use personal references. They mean squat to an employer. I want to know if you are a good worker and have competencies. Your neighbor and father-in-law will tell me wonderful things about you but won't be able to comment on your work ethic.

If you are going to use a cover letter, make absolutely sure it is typo-free and professionally formatted. If a prospective employee writes a cover letter with mistakes, it's a sign of their poor attention to detail. I will throw out resumes without even glancing at them if I see a glaring error in the cover letter. This is critical if applying for a job where typing is one of the functions of that job. An employer will want to know why he should hire you. A good cover letter can have that info for you and may help you not falter in an interview when you are asked that question.

If this were my resume, I would change the header Employment skills to Workplace Competencies. Use the same tense in your verbs. I would remove the word developed. If you have the skill/competency, say so. :) Try to start each competency with an action word. Diplomatically, Ability and effectively are not action words. Can and will are great starter words.

Examples:

Can resolve customer complaints in a dilpomatic/client-centered fashion. (the term client-centered could win you some points with a company that relishes great customer service)

Will use effective telephone communcation skills with a high level of professionalism

I would place Education section after employment skills. Education is important if the employer is looking for someone with a certain educational background, but I'd be just as interested in your trandsferable skills/competencies that you will bring from your employment history.

As much as some think a picture helps, it might with the right manager, but will absolutely cause some managers to trash your resume. While some may hire based on looks, do you really want an employer to determine your worth based on your appearance in a single photo? It may also insult the employer that you're trying to get hired on your looks.

If you're applying for a professional position, be professional in your approach to the employer.

I hope that helps. I hope you find the job you're looking for. :)


dragonfish;2623236; said:
I would also borrow or buy the book, Cover Letters that Knock Them Dead. Made a big difference when I was looking for a position. And with todays economy, employers are looking for the most bang for the buck. Make yourself standout from the unwashed masses. And good luck.
That's some great advice. Also, keep it short and sweet . No employer wants to look through a long and boring resume'. I'm sure the book covers that as well.
 
definately, definately helped. thank you so much for the great advice. the can & will does sound much better.. thank you!!

oh & btw i have 2 interviews lined up =)

another question, how long should i wait to call an employer after ive sent them my resume???????
 
imcrystal;2664351; said:
oh & btw i have 2 interviews lined up =)

another question, how long should i wait to call an employer after ive sent them my resume???????

Good luck with your interviews. :)

I would not wait longer than a week or so to follow up after sending in your resume. Even if it's just to confirm they've received it. You want that resume on top of the pile. ;)
 
No longer than a week! But I would make a point to go to the company and hand deliver it in person and ask if you can setup an interview and/or talk to someone at that moment in time. It shows initiative and makes you look like you really are interested in their company.
 
In place of "Telephone skills" Napoleon Dynamite :D Put " Data entry" ;)

Also!!! Format your resume to Fit the position you are applying for ;) And put the most important skills for that position at the top of that section ;)

You may have to re arrange your resume and save it under different job titles for ease .. :)
 
imcrystal;2622960; said:
okay so we had a manatory store meeting this week so the owner could tell us we may be going out of business that there will be a reevaluation in 6 months and until then the entire staff got a 20% pay cut. thats a HUGE difference on my paycheck & im looking for a new job.


20% pay cut must be the norm in hard times...Since last november ( 08 ), i have been on a 20% pay cut and down to 4 day work weeks....it really sucks...
 
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