Any star trek fans?
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I wore my squire of gothos shirt today for dress down Friday and got several complements which is pretty typical actually
just seen this on wikipedia, admittedly not the most renowned source; but I hate that attitude to star trek, I'd rather they didn't make anything, than betray the source material.; that's just abusing an established brand to sell a generic action film.
Did you ever play any Star Trek games?As title reads, any star trek fans on the forum?
I like the original series, Deep Space 9; and TNG, but can't say I was a fan of any other renditions, including the new films!
I played most but Star Trek Armada and Armada 2 were my favorite. Armada came out in 1999. When I went to join the forum for it I wanted my username to be Warbird....but it was taken. Since I liked the borg also, I came up with Warborg. I've been using it since.
At one point I joined a Car forum and went by ptstang but decided it was easier to stick with just one username.
Nah I never played the games, any computer I had was usually a potato and utterly incapable of supporting the games haha.
I'm going to post 'my' version of what Star Trek 11 should have been.
Again, it's script writing. It consists of several Star Trek series(TNG, Voyager, DS9 and even a little TOS) and Star Trek Armada(video game). I wrote this somewhere around 2002, that would not be possible today(actor wise). It consists of 3 parts due to the limited size of notepad. I did make 1 big mistake in naming B-4(Data's brother) as B-9. I actually poked fun of this later in the spinoff series.
Enjoy
Edit:It appears there is a limit of how big a post can be...which I have exceeded. I have to break my story down even more
Again, it's script writing. It consists of several Star Trek series(TNG, Voyager, DS9 and even a little TOS) and Star Trek Armada(video game). I wrote this somewhere around 2002, that would not be possible today(actor wise). It consists of 3 parts due to the limited size of notepad. I did make 1 big mistake in naming B-4(Data's brother) as B-9. I actually poked fun of this later in the spinoff series.
Enjoy
Edit:It appears there is a limit of how big a post can be...which I have exceeded. I have to break my story down even more
Star Trek XI
The Fall of the Federation
<Scene opens with Picard in the Captains room , reading a book>
[The door chimes]
Picard: Enter!
[Worf enters]
Picard: Ahh...Commander Wolf...what can I do for you?
Worf: I just want to turn in the roster report for the next
week before I retire for the night.
Picard: Ahh , yes. Thank you Worf.
[Worf hands it to him , but doesn't leave.]
Picard: Is there something else I can do for you?
Wolf: Well...sir, I just want to thank you for making me
Commander of the Enterprise.
Picard: With Captain Riker's promotion , the death of Data,
and Geordi not wanting to leaving engineering...it
seemed like the next logic step. The question is...
can Deep Space Nine live without you?
Worf: I suppose they will...miss me , but they have a fine
crew , they will be ok.
<Scene changes to Seldon 3 , a planet on the outskirts of
Federation space>
[A Lieutenant at a command station is operating the controls]
Lt: This is Saceed Command, Come in USS Hood. What is your
status? Have you seen it?
Riker: This is USS Hood , we have reached the last planet's
orbit. We are...It can't be...
[Static]
Lt: USS Hood please repeat we are have communication
problems. Have you made contact?...USS Hood?...
USS Hood come in...
[Static]
Riker: Transmitting message to any ships ou....
[Static]
<Scene changes back to Enterprise in Data's room which is
now B-9's room>
B-9 Geordi? Can I ask you a question?
Geordi: Sure, go ahead B-9.
B-9: It has been 11 months since the death of Data, why do
people look at me funny? Sometimes they look upset
with me? Have I done something wrong?
Geordi: No B-9, its just that you remind everyone of Data.
B-9: ...and everyone is sad because of this. Can I ask you
another question Geordi?
Geordi: Yes, what is a B-9?
B-9: When will I feel sadness? or other emotions?
Geordi: I'm sorry , but you can't.
B-9: But why? I have check the logs. Data was thought
never to have them , but did he not in fact experience
them?
Geordi: That was different he had an emotional chip. Even if
it wasn't destroyed, your psi-tronic brain couldn't
handle it.
B-9: So I am less advanced then Data...
[Geordi looks at B-9 unsure on how to respond]
<Scene changes to Picard where he has fallen asleep while
reading a book>
[Communicator buzzes, wakes Picard]
Picard: Yes, go ahead.
Lt.Blake: Sir! We have an incoming message from the USS Hood.
Picard: Put it through. [Static] Will? What is it? Are you ok?
[Static]
Riker: Captain Picard? They are coming! There is so many of
them!
[Static]
Picard: Who Will? Who? How many?
Riker: I'm changing you to my viewscreen. Can you see them?
Picard: Oh my G...[Viewscreen goes dead with static]...
Will? Will? Will?
[Picard presses communicator]
Picard: Lt. Blake set course for Seldon 3, warp 9.5.. Now!
Tell all senior staff , meeting in 30 minutes and get
me Starfleet Command.
<30 minutes later in the meeting room>
Picard: As all you know Dr. Crusher is away on vacation. We
will not be able to get her. Watch this footage I
got from the USS Hood.
[After it is shown]
Worf: [with some anger in his voice] The Borg!
Geordi: How many ships are there?
Picard: I've been able to count at least 23 but the viewscreen
wasn't big enough.
Lt.Blake: What kind of ships are they?
Picard: When I was assimilated these ships were a myth even in
future designs. They are called HydroCubes. One
consists of a Cube in the middle with 2 spheres
broken in half on each side. With the front and back
of the Cube still bare.
B-9: So, basically what we have is 2 cylinder shaped ships
smashed together to make a fat cross [everyone gives
B-9 a blank confused look]...sorry , I've been
practicing on human phrases so everyone will
understand me better.
Picard: We don't have time for this. A HydroCube is rumored to
be able to fire 5 small phasers to form one large
phaser making its firepower at least 5 times stronger
then a normal Cube. If there is a whole fleet of them
...we are facing our gravest moment yet. Starfleet has
approved of our directional change.
Our mission is to attempt to contact Saceed base or
the USS Hood for more information about this possible
Borg invasion.
Geordi, I want you to make sure that armor technology
that Admiral Janaway gave us is working... B-9, you
assist Geordi. Worf and LT.Blake continue to try to
contact them and anyone else who may have seen the
Borg. We have 17 hours before we arrive, everyone get
some sleep in that time also, dismissed.
<16 hours later on the bridge>
Lt.Blake: Sir, I'm getting a report from Vulcan. The Borg have
taken over most of the planet.
Picard: What? Does it say how long ago the Borg arrived there?
Lt.Blake: [removes earpiece in shock] 5 Hours ago...
Picard: Are you mad? The borg can't assimilate a planet in 5
hours.
Lt.Blake: It's what the report says sir.
[Picard stares off into nothing as he is thinking]
Picard: I'll be in my room, notify me when we are within
transporter range of Saceed.
<45 minutes later in the Captain's room>
[communicator goes off]
Wolf: Captain, we are now receiving many messages from other
planets that the Borg have taken over. At least 84
federation ships have been destroyed already. We are
now picking up a ship in orbit around Seldon 3.
Picard: The USS Hood?
Wolf: Unknown. We are still out of range to make it out.
Picard: I'm on my way out.
<Scene changes to the bridge. Picard enters bridge>
Picard: Report
Worf: We are now entering sensor range...the ship has
massive damage[Worf signs with an upset voice]...
it is the USS Hood. There are no life signs aboard.
Picard: Worf,Lt.Blake lets go to transporter 3 we are going
to beam down to Saceed...have Geordi come with us.
<Scene changes to the planet>
[Picard, Worf, Lt.Blake and Geordi beam down]
Riker: Captain?
Picard: Will?...what is happening?
Riker: Communications are down, but sensors are working fine,
we saw you coming.
Picard: What about the Borg?
Riker: We were here when they first arrived. At first it
was just one unknown ship on our sensors. We went out
to meet them...that's when they appeared. We counted
at least 37 Borg ships. It's like nothing I've seen
before. A new ship design...they moved with such speed.
With one shot they nearly destroyed my ship,
But they left us for dead. We were able to get back
here on impulse. They left the planet alone, all they
seemed to want to do was jam communications.
Picard: What about Deanna? What about your baby?
Riker: [with a slight smile]Jean-luc is fine.
[face changes to sorrow]Deanna is not doing so well.
She was hurt very badly, the doctors are with her now.
Picard: [with a grim look] Something is not right...the Borg
have already reached and assimilated Vulcan. Not even
the Borg can move at this speed. They have already
traveled 9 times the distance and assimilated a planet
in the time it took us to get here...and we were
already along the outskirts of the border with you.
Riker: What about the possibility of more Borg ships?
Picard: I have thought of...
[a local com badge interrupts]
Doctor: Captain Riker? it's your wife...you need to be here.
Riker: [with a scared look] I'm on my way.
<Inside the medical room>
[Riker walks up to the doctor]
Riker: How is she?
[The doctor shakes his head slowly, Riker moves over to Deanna]
{sad music plays}
Riker: Deanna?
Deanna: Slowly opens her eyes...is Jean-luc ok?
Riker: Yes, he is fine.
Deanna: Promise me you will take care of him.
Riker: Don't be silly , We will take care of him.
Deanna: I don't need to read anyone's mind to know, this is
it for me.
Riker: Deanna...
Deanna: I love you Will.
Riker: I love too Deanna.
[Deanna's eyes close, Riker starts to look confused]
Riker: Deanna...Deanna [Riker starts crying]... Deanna..
Deanna...Nooooooo!!!!!!
[Riker collapses over Deanna's body , in the background you see
Picard, Worf, and Geordi reacting to Deanna's death]
Riker: You filthy animals! I'll kill every last one of you!
Do you hear me? I'll kill every one of you!
[Picard approaches and places hand on Riker's shoulders]
Picard: Will...
Riker: [turns around] Lets go get them! Lets kill them!
Picard: Will... [looks down]
Riker: What? Oh , I forgot...I'm suppose to be professional!
Permission, to board the Enterprise sir!
Picard: Will I...[still pauses to find words to say, then gets
a firm look]permission granted.
The Fall of the Federation
<Scene opens with Picard in the Captains room , reading a book>
[The door chimes]
Picard: Enter!
[Worf enters]
Picard: Ahh...Commander Wolf...what can I do for you?
Worf: I just want to turn in the roster report for the next
week before I retire for the night.
Picard: Ahh , yes. Thank you Worf.
[Worf hands it to him , but doesn't leave.]
Picard: Is there something else I can do for you?
Wolf: Well...sir, I just want to thank you for making me
Commander of the Enterprise.
Picard: With Captain Riker's promotion , the death of Data,
and Geordi not wanting to leaving engineering...it
seemed like the next logic step. The question is...
can Deep Space Nine live without you?
Worf: I suppose they will...miss me , but they have a fine
crew , they will be ok.
<Scene changes to Seldon 3 , a planet on the outskirts of
Federation space>
[A Lieutenant at a command station is operating the controls]
Lt: This is Saceed Command, Come in USS Hood. What is your
status? Have you seen it?
Riker: This is USS Hood , we have reached the last planet's
orbit. We are...It can't be...
[Static]
Lt: USS Hood please repeat we are have communication
problems. Have you made contact?...USS Hood?...
USS Hood come in...
[Static]
Riker: Transmitting message to any ships ou....
[Static]
<Scene changes back to Enterprise in Data's room which is
now B-9's room>
B-9 Geordi? Can I ask you a question?
Geordi: Sure, go ahead B-9.
B-9: It has been 11 months since the death of Data, why do
people look at me funny? Sometimes they look upset
with me? Have I done something wrong?
Geordi: No B-9, its just that you remind everyone of Data.
B-9: ...and everyone is sad because of this. Can I ask you
another question Geordi?
Geordi: Yes, what is a B-9?
B-9: When will I feel sadness? or other emotions?
Geordi: I'm sorry , but you can't.
B-9: But why? I have check the logs. Data was thought
never to have them , but did he not in fact experience
them?
Geordi: That was different he had an emotional chip. Even if
it wasn't destroyed, your psi-tronic brain couldn't
handle it.
B-9: So I am less advanced then Data...
[Geordi looks at B-9 unsure on how to respond]
<Scene changes to Picard where he has fallen asleep while
reading a book>
[Communicator buzzes, wakes Picard]
Picard: Yes, go ahead.
Lt.Blake: Sir! We have an incoming message from the USS Hood.
Picard: Put it through. [Static] Will? What is it? Are you ok?
[Static]
Riker: Captain Picard? They are coming! There is so many of
them!
[Static]
Picard: Who Will? Who? How many?
Riker: I'm changing you to my viewscreen. Can you see them?
Picard: Oh my G...[Viewscreen goes dead with static]...
Will? Will? Will?
[Picard presses communicator]
Picard: Lt. Blake set course for Seldon 3, warp 9.5.. Now!
Tell all senior staff , meeting in 30 minutes and get
me Starfleet Command.
<30 minutes later in the meeting room>
Picard: As all you know Dr. Crusher is away on vacation. We
will not be able to get her. Watch this footage I
got from the USS Hood.
[After it is shown]
Worf: [with some anger in his voice] The Borg!
Geordi: How many ships are there?
Picard: I've been able to count at least 23 but the viewscreen
wasn't big enough.
Lt.Blake: What kind of ships are they?
Picard: When I was assimilated these ships were a myth even in
future designs. They are called HydroCubes. One
consists of a Cube in the middle with 2 spheres
broken in half on each side. With the front and back
of the Cube still bare.
B-9: So, basically what we have is 2 cylinder shaped ships
smashed together to make a fat cross [everyone gives
B-9 a blank confused look]...sorry , I've been
practicing on human phrases so everyone will
understand me better.
Picard: We don't have time for this. A HydroCube is rumored to
be able to fire 5 small phasers to form one large
phaser making its firepower at least 5 times stronger
then a normal Cube. If there is a whole fleet of them
...we are facing our gravest moment yet. Starfleet has
approved of our directional change.
Our mission is to attempt to contact Saceed base or
the USS Hood for more information about this possible
Borg invasion.
Geordi, I want you to make sure that armor technology
that Admiral Janaway gave us is working... B-9, you
assist Geordi. Worf and LT.Blake continue to try to
contact them and anyone else who may have seen the
Borg. We have 17 hours before we arrive, everyone get
some sleep in that time also, dismissed.
<16 hours later on the bridge>
Lt.Blake: Sir, I'm getting a report from Vulcan. The Borg have
taken over most of the planet.
Picard: What? Does it say how long ago the Borg arrived there?
Lt.Blake: [removes earpiece in shock] 5 Hours ago...
Picard: Are you mad? The borg can't assimilate a planet in 5
hours.
Lt.Blake: It's what the report says sir.
[Picard stares off into nothing as he is thinking]
Picard: I'll be in my room, notify me when we are within
transporter range of Saceed.
<45 minutes later in the Captain's room>
[communicator goes off]
Wolf: Captain, we are now receiving many messages from other
planets that the Borg have taken over. At least 84
federation ships have been destroyed already. We are
now picking up a ship in orbit around Seldon 3.
Picard: The USS Hood?
Wolf: Unknown. We are still out of range to make it out.
Picard: I'm on my way out.
<Scene changes to the bridge. Picard enters bridge>
Picard: Report
Worf: We are now entering sensor range...the ship has
massive damage[Worf signs with an upset voice]...
it is the USS Hood. There are no life signs aboard.
Picard: Worf,Lt.Blake lets go to transporter 3 we are going
to beam down to Saceed...have Geordi come with us.
<Scene changes to the planet>
[Picard, Worf, Lt.Blake and Geordi beam down]
Riker: Captain?
Picard: Will?...what is happening?
Riker: Communications are down, but sensors are working fine,
we saw you coming.
Picard: What about the Borg?
Riker: We were here when they first arrived. At first it
was just one unknown ship on our sensors. We went out
to meet them...that's when they appeared. We counted
at least 37 Borg ships. It's like nothing I've seen
before. A new ship design...they moved with such speed.
With one shot they nearly destroyed my ship,
But they left us for dead. We were able to get back
here on impulse. They left the planet alone, all they
seemed to want to do was jam communications.
Picard: What about Deanna? What about your baby?
Riker: [with a slight smile]Jean-luc is fine.
[face changes to sorrow]Deanna is not doing so well.
She was hurt very badly, the doctors are with her now.
Picard: [with a grim look] Something is not right...the Borg
have already reached and assimilated Vulcan. Not even
the Borg can move at this speed. They have already
traveled 9 times the distance and assimilated a planet
in the time it took us to get here...and we were
already along the outskirts of the border with you.
Riker: What about the possibility of more Borg ships?
Picard: I have thought of...
[a local com badge interrupts]
Doctor: Captain Riker? it's your wife...you need to be here.
Riker: [with a scared look] I'm on my way.
<Inside the medical room>
[Riker walks up to the doctor]
Riker: How is she?
[The doctor shakes his head slowly, Riker moves over to Deanna]
{sad music plays}
Riker: Deanna?
Deanna: Slowly opens her eyes...is Jean-luc ok?
Riker: Yes, he is fine.
Deanna: Promise me you will take care of him.
Riker: Don't be silly , We will take care of him.
Deanna: I don't need to read anyone's mind to know, this is
it for me.
Riker: Deanna...
Deanna: I love you Will.
Riker: I love too Deanna.
[Deanna's eyes close, Riker starts to look confused]
Riker: Deanna...Deanna [Riker starts crying]... Deanna..
Deanna...Nooooooo!!!!!!
[Riker collapses over Deanna's body , in the background you see
Picard, Worf, and Geordi reacting to Deanna's death]
Riker: You filthy animals! I'll kill every last one of you!
Do you hear me? I'll kill every one of you!
[Picard approaches and places hand on Riker's shoulders]
Picard: Will...
Riker: [turns around] Lets go get them! Lets kill them!
Picard: Will... [looks down]
Riker: What? Oh , I forgot...I'm suppose to be professional!
Permission, to board the Enterprise sir!
Picard: Will I...[still pauses to find words to say, then gets
a firm look]permission granted.
