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This is the second part of part 1

<Scene changes to far away , The Klingon homeworld: Kronos>

[A fleet of Klingon ships leave the planet and engage a Borg
HydroCube in battle. The HydroCube fires single phasers at each
ship damaging or destroying them. They are having no effect of
the HydroCube]


<Meanwhile back aboard the Enterprise on the bridge as Picard and
the away team enter>

A Lt. at the helm: Sir , incoming message. The Borg are in
Klingon space, heading in the Kronos
homeworld area.

[Worf has a look of shock and anger]

Picard: So, it's not just the Federation they are after. Has
there been any sightings in Romulan space yet?

Lt. at the helm: No sir!

Picard: Maximum warp to Earth, engage! What is the estimated
time of arrival?

Lt. at helm: 14 days 8 hours

[with a disgusted look by the news Picard turns to Riker]

Picard: Will, I need to see you in my room now.


<Scene changes to the Captain's room>

Picard: Will, I understand your anger...but I need someone
who is acting like a Captain, not someone out for
revenge.
Riker: [about to argue he stops for a second] I understand.
Picard: Arrange for a meeting in about one hour. There is
over 4 pages of reports that I need to catch up on
first.

<In the meeting room one hour later>

Picard: I wish I had good news to report, but that is not
the case. The Borg have already taken over some
important sites and planets in one day. This is at an
uncanny rate even for the Borg. Geordi, what is the
status of the armor?
Geordi: Fully operational. We tested it 22 times already with
no problems.
Picard: Excellent, we will need it. Admiral Janaway is
recommissoning Voyager with her crew.
Riker: We will need all the help we can get. What about the
Romulans?
Picard: Still no word on the Borg attacking them. It seems
that they will not help us because they fear the Borg
are already planning an attack on their space.
Riker: ...and they want all there ships protecting themselves.
Typical Romulans.
Picard: I know this is bad but we can't give up yet...
dismissed.


<10 days later on Earth>

Janaway: I knew it was a good Idea to keep most of Voyager
together. How is it coming Tom?
Paris: It's still a mess Admiral.
Janaway: We have about six hours till lift off.
Paris: You can't be serious? The ship hasn't ran in nearly a
year. We need another day of just testing alone.
Janaway: I'm sorry Tom, the Borg have been sighted about 30
light years from here. The rate they are moving...we
don't have days, we have hours. I know we are running
a thin crew but I have faith in everyone.
Kim: What about Chakotay, 7 of 9 and Tovok?
Janaway: Chakotay and 7 of 9 will arrive in about 2 hours.
[Janaway frowns]
I thought you knew about Tovok...he was on Vulcan.

[Everyone has a sad look]

<Scene changes to Enterprise in the meeting room>

Picard: For those that don't know I have more bad news. Over
60% of the Federation has fallen or been under attack
by the Borg now. They continue to move with incredible
speed. Many of the important planets are now under
Borg control. They are closing in on Earth. 738
Federation ships destroyed or assimilated. Over
300 Klingon ships. Bajor is one of the planets to
fall under Borg control.
Worf: What about Deep Space Nine?

[Picard looks at Worf then nods his head]

Picard: Kronos and most of the Empire has fallen.

[Worf moves to adjust himself in the chair, shows sign of anger]

Picard: The Borg have now started entering Romulan Space. The
Cardassians, the Breen, and others have collapsed.
Lt.Blake: Great! We are all going to die! aren't we?
Riker: Get ahold of yourself Lieutenant!

[B-9 has a confused look]

Picard: Also, we will meet up with Martok at the Celtive
system in 21 hours.[Worf looks at Picard]. It would
seem that Martok has been in Federation space
attaching an Ion cannon to his Ship. We are hoping
this will have an effect on the Borg.
Dismissed.

[Everyone gets up and leaves except B-9]

Picard: Is there something wrong B-9?
B-9: Can I ask you a question?
Picard: What is it?
B-9: What is death?
Picard: [Picard grins with a small laugh]...oh you remind
me so much of Data. If only there was more time.
B-9: Sir?
Picard: Never Mind.

<Scene changes back to Voyager, 6 hours later>

Janaway: Ok , everyone...our mission is to meet and stop the
Borg by any means necessary. Tom and Chakotay, I
need you at the helm.
Chakotoy: Yes, Admiral.
Janaway: 7 of 9 and Harry , I need you two at weapons.
B'Elanna , of course I need you in engineering.
B'Elanna: I don't suppose I could convince you to wait another
day...could I?
Janaway: Sounds like you have been talking to your husband...
Sorry, we are leaving now.
Doctor: What about me?
Janaway: hmmm...we don't need a doctor right now. Can you help
B'Elanna in engineering?
Doctor: Well...it's out of my area but I suppose I can.
Janaway: Everyone else go to your respected posts. Let's go!

<Scene changes to a view of Earth as Voyager leaves>

<More time passes, scene changes again to Enterprise on the
bridge>

B-9: Sir, we are approaching the Celtive system...and
sir we are picking a Borg vessel 2 light years away.
Picard: Change to an intercept course, deploy armor and go
to Red Alert.


<Scene changes to Voyager bridge>

Paris: Admiral, Borg vessel dead ahead.
Janaway: Drop out of warp. I was hoping we could have at least
gotten past Alpha Centauri... deploy armor.

[As armor deploys, the Borg vessel appears on the viewscreen]

7 of 9: Admiral, we need to get out of here now.

[Janaway looks at 7 of 9]

Kim: Admiral...we are being hailed.


<Scene changes back to Enterprise as it approaches the
Borg ship>

Picard: Lets not waste any time...Fire!

[No damamge is done to the Borg ship. It starts to glow]

Riker: Everyone brace yourself!

[The Borg's 5-phaser which can only be described as each
Sphere's half, fires to a central location in front of the main
body which fires the 5th phaser which combines with the other
four and seeks the target]

[The Borg fire the 5 phasers at the Enterprise , which goes
right thru the armor and thru the saucer and out the other end
causing destruction in it's path.]


*** To be continued ***
 
Nice beginning. It's going to require some tweaking. From the onset, Picard telling Worf that he was the 4th choice for selection to command doesn't show the tact that Picard is known for. And, Worf making a statement like "they will be OK" is out of character from his usual formalities.
I like the premise of the story. Just have to take each line of dialog and bend it to the personal and familiar characteristics of each person to make them (sic: sound) more credible.
 
Here's part 2

Part 2

<Scene goes into the Enterprise bridge, showing smoke and fire.
Everyone picks themselves up>

Picard: Damage report!

Worf: Armor has failed! Shields are down! Engines and
weapons are off-line! Casualty reports are coming in
throughout the ship.

Riker: Seal the hull breaches! [Looks at Picard] We were
lucky they didn't hit us from the side.

Lt.Blake: We are sitting ducks!

<Scene changes to an outer view>

[Just as the Borg vessel starts to move closer. A Klingon ship
decloaks In front of the Borg vessel. It fires phasers as it
passes by...with no affect to the Borg ship]

[On the Enterprise bridge]

Worf: It's the Brang!

[Viewscreen of Martok comes up]

Martok: It's good to see we arrived just in time.

Picard: Can you fire the Ion Cannon?

Martok: We are coming around now...lining up...Fire!

[Ion Cannon fires at Borg ship. It shakes a little but otherwise
appears undamaged]

Picard: Damage.

Worf: [looks upset] 10% damage to the shields.

Picard: That's the best weapon we have. Martok, can you fire
it again?

Martok: [growls] Negative! It will take at least 1 hour to
recharge.

Picard: Look out Martok! The Borg are moving towards you!

[The Borg vessel fires a single phaser and makes a direct hit on
Martok's ship. Enterprise loses viewscreen with Martok]

Picard: Damage on Martok's ship.

Worf: 20% damage , at least 50 dead. Weapons are damaged.

Lt.Blake: Sir! The Borg vessel is leaving!

Riker: [with a confused look , looks at Picard] They are not
going to finish us or assimilate us?

Lt.blake: We have audio with Martok's ship.

Martok: The cowards...look at them run!

Picard: No...they must have other orders. We were no threat
to them. [presses communicator] Geordi? How soon
until we have engines on-line?

Geordi: Like this? weeks...if we were able to get to the
Celtive system we could get it down to hours.

Picard: How long would it take for us to get there if Martok
tow us there with a tractor beam?

B-9: 8 days, 19 hours, 37 minutes, 23 se...

Picard: [Picard nods] Thank you B-9. [Looks at Riker] Well...
that's not an option.

Geordi: Sir! Since the engines themselves are not damaged. I
may be able to jump start the warp engines.

Picard: Explain.

Geordi: Since it was the systems that was damaged. I may be
able to rewire some systems and give us warp speed
for a second...we can coast the rest of the way
there. It would only take hours to get there.

Picard: Make it so.

Geordi: There is a risk. We could overload the engines. If
this happens not even the Celtive system would be
able to help us fix them.

Picard: Understood...proceed. Martok? Can you meet us there?

Martok: If it works we will see you there. Martok out.

Picard: Engage Geordi.

[Ship jumps forward]

Geordi: It worked. Estimated 3 hours 24 minutes.

Picard: That's good. Will what do we know about the Celtive
system?

Riker: Staher 2 is the only planet that supports life and
it mainly consists of retired Federation officers,
but they can help with the repairs.

[Hours later as Enterprise approaches the Celtive system with
Martok's ship already there.]

Worf: Captain... The report is finally coming in, 113
dead...mainly families, also the acting chief medical
officer was one of them. The Brang is reporting 61
dead.

Lt.blake: Sir, we are getting a communication from Starfleet
Headquarters on Earth...Voyager has been destroyed...
Earth has now engaged the Borg. Sir, they are sending
video from Voyager just before it was destroyed...
and sir, it's coming from a strange frequency.

Picard: [Looks at Blake's panel] All senior staff in the
meeting room now.

<About 15 minutes later in the meeting room >

Picard: The rest of the message from Starfleet says that a
scout ship passed by where voyager was and confirmed
debris that matched Voyager. Here's the video.

<Scene changes to Voyager from a few hours ago>

Paris: Admiral, Borg vessel dead ahead.
Janaway: Drop out of warp. I was hoping we could have at least
gotten past Alpha Centauri... deploy armor.

[As armor deploys, the Borg vessel appears on the viewscreen]

7 of 9: Admiral, we need to get out of here now.

[Janaway looks at 7 of 9]

Kim: Admiral...we are being hailed.

Janaway: On screen.

[Borg Queen appears on screen]

Borg Queen: So we met again.

Janaway: Why are you doing this?

Borg Queen: It's quite simple. We are going to consume the
Federation...and to think I have you to thank for it.

Janaway: Me? You must be mad.

Borg Queen: Just before you and your future self collapsed the
Transwarp Hub...another borg vessel besides the
sphere made it through which also happened to be
the Cube that captured the future Janaway's ship.
Having been cut off from the hive they did not
suffer from the virus that the future Janaway gave
us. They returned and restored order to us. Not only
did we assimilate this new technology...we
modified it.

WE can manipulate the temporal device to adjust
time. One of your seconds is hours for us. How long
ago do you think we entered your space? We have been
in Federation space now for nearly a year. Resistance
is futile my dear...Admiral.

Janaway: We have stopped you before and we will do it again.

Borg Queen: Janaway , You have only survived because I have
allowed it. Seven has been helping me keep an eye
on you.

7 of 9: You lie! I have never done nor will I ever do
anything to help you!

Borg Queen: Is that so? [Borg Queen twitches] Kill them!

[ 7 of 9 slowly picks up phaser while shaking. Chakotay stands up
to confront 7 of 9 ]

Chakotay: Seven fight her!

7 of 9: Stay back!

[7 of 9 fires and hits Chakotay. Harry Kim runs towards 7 of 9]

Kim: Nooo...Seven stop!

[ 7 of 9 very quickly fires again and hits Harry then turns phaser
on Janaway]

Janaway: Stop this Seven. Don't let her win. We are your family.
Remember all the time we have spent together.

[ 7 of 9 looks at Chakotay's body on the ground. A tear runs down
her face]

7 of 9: No... [she drops the phaser] I will not kill anymore.

Borg Queen: Very well, we have also improved our phasers...your
armor is no match for us.

[The 5 phaser system fires on Voyager, hits the back part of the
ship. The bridge is smoking and on fire]

Borg Queen: Goodbye Voyager!

[HydroCube fires single phaser , screen goes blank]

Picard: [with sadness in his voice] Admiral Janaway gave her
life to get this information. We need to find a
counter for this new temporal device. Also we need to
know why the Borg don't register this frequency in
which we were given this information.

Riker: I remember on one of Kirk's missions. They encountered
a race that moved through time at a faster rate. Could
we use the same fomula that Dr. MCcoy and Spock used?

B-9: One of the chemicals used was called forrwa which
hasn't been seen in forty years, plus it wouldn't
work on anything non-living.

Geordi: Voyager sent the message by Ultraviolet Gamma D,
which is found all over the universe. Most of the
time messages get broken up and lost by this method.
I am surprised the Borg didn't see this.

Picard: Could it be possible that there was still a little
bit of the virus left...and the Borg just overlooked
this?

Riker: A bug or a flaw?

Geardi: [shrugs shouders] It's possible.

Picard: Try to find a way to for us to use this to our
advantage. [Looks at Worf] Worf, I want all non-
combat persons off the ship after the ship is fixed...
and get me a list of all the doctors on the planet.
Dismissed.

[Worf and Martok walk out together]

Martok: Worf, I have lost many needed crewmen, come aboard
the Brang, fight with Klingons.

Worf: My place is here.

Martok: We may die soon. Don't you want to die with Klingons?

Worf: I will be honored if my death is here...however I
will consider your offer.
 
2nd part of part 2

<Scene changes back to the meeting room. Picard is alone. he
gets up and leaves the room. Picard looks shocked as he enters
a 21st century courtroom>

Picard: Q... [From darkness Q enters on his throne] this is
your doing isn't it?

Q: Why is always my fault everytime you see me?

Picard: Because you are the one always doing something.

Q: Not this time Jean-luc. When we first met I found
you guilty for the crimes of humanity, the sentence
was the extinction of your race. Like your own
nations of your pitiful world there is the rise and
the fall of everything. I am here to watch the Fall
of the Federation.

Picard: You came to gloat? It's your fault we met the Borg.

Q: Come now Captain...I just introduced you to your
executioner. Even if you didn't know them...they
knew you.

Picard: You must help us.

[Crowd in the courtroom boos]

Q: Sorry, I can't overturn the jury[Q and his throne
back away into the darkness] Goodbye Jean-luc.

Picard: Q!... <scene changes to the bridge> Q!

Worf: Captain?

Picard: [Turns around]I was just paid a visit by Q.
[Looks at Riker] Can I talk to you for just a moment?

<Inside the Captain's room a few minutes later>

Riker: So, you don't think Q is behind this?

Picard: For once...no, I think he just came to show off that
he knows we are crumbling ...Will...have we gone to
far? Could he be right that our time is over?

Riker: I don't believe it for a second. I think he is just
trying to get to you.

[Door Chimes]

Picard: Enter!

Worf: Sir, a new message from a ship above Earth. Starfleet
Headquarters has fallen to the Borg. They now control
45% of Earth.[There is silence for a minute] Here is
a list of the doctors on this planet.

Picard: Ahh , yes. Thank you Worf.

[Worf hands it to him , but doesn't leave.]

Picard: Is there something else I can do for you?

Worf: [Trying to find the words]Permission to go on board
the Brang.

Picard: But I need you here Worf.

Worf: Sir, with Captain Riker here I am more in the way
[looks at Riker] no offense.

Riker: None taken.

Worf: The Brang have lost over 25% of their crew, much of
thei...

Picard: [Interrupts Worf] Permission granted.

Worf: Thank you.

[Worf leaves]

Picard: [Picard starts to go over list while talking] this
war isn't going good at all.

Riker: There has to be a way to beat them.

Picard: Yes, but...[continues to look at list]

Riker: Is something wrong?

Picard: Something I think Worf missed.

<About 40 minutes later on the planet. Picard walks up to a
house in the middle of nowhere and rings the house. Door opens>

Picard: [With a smile] Dr. Pulaski!

Pulaski: [Also with a smile]Call me Kathrine...I'm retired.
What are you doing here?

Picard: Haven't you heard the news?

Pulaski: Captain, I came to this planet to escape the outside
universe. I can be at my house for weeks without
hearing anything.

Picard: I have alot to tell you.

[About an hour later]

Pulaski: This is not good.

Picard: Besides the fact you are retired, I can't order you
to join us. I can only ask. It's true we may not
survive.

Pulaski: I accept, under one condition.

<Scene changes to a shuttle on docking bay 12 at a shuttle
station>

Picard: I forgot you don't like the transporter.

Shuttle pilot: Sir, theres someone at Docking bay 26 that wants
to see you...he says its important.

Picard: [With a slight impatient look] Would you excuse me
for a minute?

Pulaski: Of Course.

<Scene changes to Docking bay 26, Picard looks shocked then happy>

Picard: Mr. Scott!

Scotty: Hello there Captain.

Picard: It's good to see you. What can I do for you?

Scotty: I want to go with you.

Picard: [With a serious look] I can understand your desires
but your retired and we may not survive.

Scotty: Captain, My place has always been aboard a starship.
I heard engineering is in bad shape and needs lots
of repairs. I've also heard them mechanical beasties
have but almost taken over Earth. I don't want to
end up dying on this planet when they come. I'd
rather be fighting for Earth.

Picard: Permission granted, besides I just brought one person
out of retirement. I don't want to deny someone
else. How soon can you be ready?

Scotty: I am ready now.

<9 hours have passed, now back on the Enterprise bridge. Geordi
and Scotty walk on the bridge and over to a panel>

Geordi: Engines and weapons are now back on line. Shields
are up, however we still have hull breaches on deck
15,16 and 17.

Picard: Will the shields hold them?

Geordi: [shrugs shoulders] They should. Sir, I want you to
look at this idea with the Ultraviolet Gamma D.

Picard: [looks at panel] Yes, I think this could be
wonderful. Good job Geordi.

Geordi: Well...it was Scotty's idea.

Picard: [With a smile] I see... Well done Scotty.

Scotty: Aye, I have to earn my keep here. The other good
news is we can install it after we go to warp and
it should only take 12 hours.

Picard: Very well. Send this to the Brang. Mr Blake set
course for Earth...maximum warp , engage.

Lt.Blake: Yes sir maximum warp, We should arrive at Earth in
4 days 7 hours.


*** To be Continued ***
 
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