I really like how the design is comin Big, but I agree, maybe we should leave out the teeth..mmm seems a little too "coloring book" like for me. Does that make sense? And I agree, play with the E a little more to define the lobes and try to bring in the middle of the E. Overall though I think you did an awesome job on it though!
I am lovin all the sketches being posted! Great artwork! I am still working on a few, and then have to figure out how to get them on here but once I do I will post my ideas as well. Keep 'em coming!